Nice Job
I agree with SteakJohnson in that it seems empty in a few parts and could be filled up nicely with a pad or something to that effect. Otherwise it was a wonderful song. I see it was made on an old computer that could barely handle the project file. I'd remix this if I were you (if your current computer can handle it). The hard kick that is used through most of the song is a tad too short for some parts. If you edited it, added a slight echo, or found a longer hard kick and integrated that into the song, it's go quite nicely. A little toying with glitch VSTs such as dblue or perky could definitely give a nice result if you modified just a few samples here and there and added a tad of glitch.
If you choose not to remix this, I'd actually love to try my hand at it. You should definitely drop me a PM with that decision.