Love it!
Although ragnampiza was right, it's not an up to date style, but that's perfectly fine and perfectly acceptable. It's slightly nostalgic in a way. This song really brings out some good feelings in me. You really did a bang-up job on this. I'm glad you took my advice to expand on it, it was well worth it. I found NOTHING wrong with this track, it's astonishing. I wanna get up and dance to this right now. 5/5, 10/10/, favorited, dl'd.
keep up the great work!
Thanks man! Greatly appreciated :D
Nice, but short.
It sounds wonderful. I'm with the reviewer below me - ti's a tad short. I know it's a remix, and you can't really remake things that aren't there, but that's where your own creativity comes in. I know, I shouldn't be one to talk, my remix of nubbinownz' WIP wasn't as original as it could've been, but I added a few things of my own, and I plan on redoing it in the near future with a few more of my own influences and melodies. I'd like to see this with some more of your own original content in it. I think it'd be great! It's alright to get creative with remixes and add your own things. That's what makes them yours, and not an exact replica.
Yeah i was bored haha :D Thanks for the reviews!
VERY Happy!
This is quite an uplifting track. I liked the melody a lot, the bass MADE this song. It sounds sweet. It made me smile. It's so incredibly happy sounding! The reason I didn't vote 10 is when the lead synth from 1:00 to about 1:30 is alone with just the bass, it got repetitive quickly, and it sounded kind of "gross", for lack of a better word to describe it. The outro was very anticlimactic as well, and with an ending as good as this has, a huge climactic ending would do well.
I know it sounds like I'm saying bad things about the song, I'm not. I still really liked the track. 4/5, 8/10. Keep up the good work =D
Yeah, it made me smile too haha. Ill try to work on the climax of my songs. Its hard to get them really fired up :P
Fantastic Job!
This is just what I need to relax after a long day. It's laid back, but it keeps me awake. It's catchy, rhythmic, and overall just sounds nice. I gave you a 9 instead of a 10 because a few of the drum samples in a few places were a little loud to me, it became just a tad irritating if I focused on it. It almost took away attention from the rest of the song. But it's not a big problem. I really like it, and judging by the score, so does everyone else. Keep up the great work!
I wonder what drum samples you're talking about. I wanted to give it a certain level and feel, as well as keep it upbeat but still relaxing. Whatever it was, I'm glad you like the song and thanks a lot.
I GET THIS!!!
Sounds like you were aiming for a robotic track from the description. Before I even read it, I pictured a generic boxy robot with light bulbs for eyes and generic vacuum hoses for arms just walking very wobbly. After listening twice and picturing it, I read the description. You really got the right feel for this, man. I can't wait to hear the final. This completely deserves the current 4.88 it has =D
You did an AMAZING job with this track.
Hahaha, thanks dude! I kinda got a bit lucky that it fit the robot genre; gonna add some more sounds here and there to emphasize the roboticness!
I like it
I like it. I'm not too big on Dubstep songs, so I don't really know too much about the genre, what it's supposed to be like, and I can't tell what people's goals are for the songs, so I can't give a very accurate review. That aside, yours really seem to latch onto me. All I can suggest to improve this is what Chromonut said - The vocals were too loud and the song other than the buzzy drum melody thing (I'm not sure what to call it..) was too quiet. I'd say especially amp up the pad (or violins.. not sure what was used in that melody. It was really that soft..).
Now I know it sounds like an overall negative review here, but it's not. Just some friendly advice. =)
Keep up the good work!
Awesome! Thanks for the feedback :) Dubstep is just a bit of a free flow thing, it really has no structure, usually there some sort of drop and wobbles with a snare on every half beat and thats about all I know about dubstep!
Cool, I'll see what I can do! :D
It Has Potential
I see this is finally up, Andrew. Sounds.. okay. It beats my first song by miles lol. Just a bit of advice for you, it feels like you're switching the feel of the song too dramatically and unsmoothly too many times in the song. Each part if it was it's own song wouldn't be too bad. That huge silence halfway through towards the end is something to cut as well.
I must say 1:50-End if elaborated on, would make quite a nice ambient/dark techno/DnB beat.
Keep working. This isn't too bad. It sounds like you have the hang of whatever program(s) you're using, so just focus on one style for a song, and you should be fine. Drop me a PM next time you upload something. I'd like to hear it. =D
Thanks man, for your honesty mostly. Well the whole thing is, i was just messing with the program at first, and i though "Meh, why not post it." Lol. I knew the song sucked, with most of the things you said. Again, wasjust fucking around with the thing.
Im in the works of recording and making new songs, so ill letcha know when theyre up :D
Good but too short.
I can really dig this. It probably would've gotten a 10 had it not been 19 seconds =(
No real complaints other than that. It's quite catchy.
Awesome, thanks!
Nice!
I love it. It's all so good. It all just kind of melts together. I love the drums a LOT. The melody is just epic. It's not too heavy or light for itself, as I sometimes find with pieces. If this is just "another day"'s work for you, you should be VERY proud. It's gotta be one of the best songs I've heard in a while. It's not too long, it's fresh the whole time, not repetitive, keep up the great work, man!
I'm g;ad you enjoyed it then. I really wish more people would review my stuff, too. It would help me alot.
But anyway, I've been slowly working to improve my songs and make them more epic feeling (when it applies), not feel repetitive, and blend better.
I'm glad you thought I did a good job of it. I sure thought I did.
EDIT: think the pad should have put back farther in the mix. Sort of takes away from the other stuff (I have a new computer in a quieter room now). :D
Loving it!
Definitely a good mix =) I really don't understand why it's score is only a 3 as of now. All the parts of it just melt together like butter. This looks like it's gonna be a very nice competition. You've got a seriously good mix on your hands here.
Answer to the what you don't understand: It's NewGrounds. hahaha. Thanks for the kind words mate. Cheers!
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